Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, August 14, 2019
My calander 14/8/19
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Manaaki
ReplyDeleteIt's Mum, what a great picture you have done. I see you commented on not having enough colour maybe this is something you could spend sometime working on this. Also I see you mentioned about doing some outlining maybe you could use a black felt or use a coloured pencil for this. Did your class have a specific theme for what your calendar art should look like or did you get to chose? Keep up the great work I am so proud of how hard you are trying in class this year.
Hi Manaaki I like your calendar art it looks like you have put a lot
ReplyDeleteof work into it. Next time could you put some more punctuation into your description.