this is my Design a room-area you can leave comments please
Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview PÄrua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 2, 2019
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Manaaki this looked like it would have been alot of fun to design. I wonder what other things you could add that you would like in your dream home? Think about things you like doing maybe you would like a movie room.I did notice you missed out one important detail, where are you going to go to the toiletš. Great work though Manaaki, use your great imagination and add some amazing details. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteLove Mum x